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Clayfacer - First Dubfuck

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Jun 13, 2010 | 7:39 AM EDT
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1 MB
28 sec
Score
3.79 / 5.00

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Rated 3.79 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Dubstep
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Author Comments

Here's my first attempt at that damn genre we know as "Dubstep".

I've only spent an hour so far tweaking the bass itself. Give me some feedback pwetty plox. :D

PS: This is my first time EVER making dubstep. So I know my wobble is major noob. DX

Love, Clayfuck.

Reviews


sugarsimonsugarsimon

Rated 3 / 5 stars

dubstep song

is it tell about the song?



jetbusterjetbuster

Rated 5 / 5 stars

oi dubstep...

is teh way of the future man <3 sure the wobbles where off but sexy bass is all that matters to me atm Xd

if you know dubstep well theres a dude called rusko and if your heaps srs about it you'd look him up he does alot X]



StepStep

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Very cool.

You know, for your first attempt, this sounds very good. I personally don't like Dubstep that much, but if it wasn't a 28-second loop, then I would've downloaded it. Sure, the wobbles are badly executed, but heck, it's your first dubstep, and that's what practice is for, right?

The melodic section of this is probably what I liked most about it. This has a sort of entrancing sound to it, yet the rough bass gives this song its dubstep identity. Atmosphere was quite spacey yet still great, and I suppose I can't mention anything which I didn't like about the melodies. On the other hand, as I said above, the wobbles in this aren't that good. The wobbles are more like abrupt fade-ins rather than the proper LFO-wobbles that a dubstep song should have. I think that the wobbles are basically the biggest flaw of this submission, other than its length obviously.

The instruments you used were awesome. I really liked the bass, it was rough and powerful, and the spacey synths in the background were awesome. This is actually quite an original/unique dubstep song. Sure, the bass makes it clearly a dubstep song, but the spacey atmosphere in the background was really cool and I never heard anything like it in any other dubstep song. The production was pretty good too.

The transitions on the whole were fine. This is only a small loop so there obviously aren't many transitions, but I suppose that it flowed very smoothly. The structure/variety could be better though. My problem with it is that it's basically the same thing repeated twice. You could've easily made this a 14-second loop by cutting out exactly half of it and still produce the same result. I think that the second repetition of this could've had a few subtle changes to it, in my opinion. On the other hand, it looped perfectly, so good job.

To be perfectly honest with you, I didn't really notice the drums until I came to this paragraph where I usually talk about percussion. I mean, I was so entranced by the foreground that I didn't even notice that there were drums in the background xD. Having said that, the drums were great, just as dubstep drums should be. I would've liked a stronger kick, but that's about it.

Overall, for your first attempt, this is impressive. I think the main thing you should work on would be the wobbles, since the fact that this is only 28-seconds long and is basically 2 repetitions of the same thing is just because this is a small loop which doesn't need to be that long or have a complex structure. Work on the wobbles, and I'd have mistaken you for an experienced dubstep artist. Good luck making dubstep, and great work on the submission!
7/10
5/5 since this song got very badly 0-bombed.

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sixflabsixflab

Rated 4 / 5 stars

-Title-

-Well it's nice to see that you have lost your virginity.

-It's pretty good for a first attempt at making a wobble but like TeKNeTiC said it's just a little too hard and that makes it less free flowing. The melody in the background is a nice polar opposite to the abbrasive wobble though.

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TeKNeTiCTeKNeTiC

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Well

I agree that the wobble is fcked up, but its overall pretty good for a first attempt. In my opinion, when the wobble is fading in, it comes in too hard.

5/5
<TeK>

PS good taste F-777.......... This is definitely the BEST dubstep EVER CREATED.


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