Critique FTW!

For a first draft of a piece, this is really creative and well done. 3/4 time is rather rare in rock. The acoustic sound is very repetitive, but catchy. I like how the drums get a little more complex at about the 0:15 mark, even if it is just adding 16ths versus 8ths. The distortion guitar as a background sound is also very clever. Both guitars are very catchy. The drums are phrased oddly in the meter. They sound as if there should be a 4th beat rather than a new pattern. The snare should hit 2 3 to make this sound more "whole".
In short, the only things I have to gripe about are drum patterning and transitions in the guitars from one passage to another. Transitions are a key difference between having passages and having a song. I really like this as is, but hope to see a more pumped version of this.

Smiling about like!

Gave me a happy-go-lucky, india pop sorta feeling which I detest strongly. It just fits the cliche so much.

But in terms of musical arrangements and guitar playing, I thought this was very good. I liked the drums in it. Very good!