Try this:
Collaborate. Find someone who plays guitar. lay down the back track, then have them play this and record it. and there ya go, full song.
Good composition.
Don't get frightened of the piano intro, it's Metal, seriously :)
I dedicate this Song to my friend Kohli.
He asked me for writing something more "heavy-metal-ish", and this is my answer: Archangel Reborn. (In general, I listen to Classical Music ^^)
Try this:
Collaborate. Find someone who plays guitar. lay down the back track, then have them play this and record it. and there ya go, full song.
Good composition.
Amazing melody
This song would get a 10/10 if you used a real guitar over these vsts. I seriously can not stand the sound of fruity loops guitar crap. But your keys are phenominal. You should be a metal musician. We could use ya lol.
Yay!
I thought it was really good, except for the guitar, but I know your pain. Getting FL Slayer to sound good is nearly impossible.
Upstanding work -as usual!
The title sounds kitschy to me :P
But the music is nice!
Don't stop composing :)
Slayer...fpc...(FLKeys?)
Agh, the composition is great, but the vsts aren't. Sounds like you used a lot of default FL vsts, which usually stand out to anyone who uses the program.
8/10 for the composition, which is awesome.
5/10 for the song as it is.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.