Hmmm.. Let's take a look see.
Musically, this is pretty great. The volume levels are a little out of whack. Some synths and sounds are louder than others, which gets a tad annoying after a while, but that's naught but a small fix. Definitely love the many melodies that were inputted into this song. That super saw synth is pretty cools. I think many of these sounds could have done much better with some side chaining to the kick, because it does get a little overwhelming after a while.
Those leads are pretty great, but near the end, the delay makes them peak to quite an extent, and that definitely hurt my ears a little bit. As for the mixing, it sounds in order somewhat. Nothing seems to be ducking under, but I think you could do with a bit of frequency fixing. Just a tiny bit, nothing too big. The effects are great in this track as well. Very audible kick, and snare - they manage to punch through quite nicely.
I think when the guitar comes in, you might want to lower its volume level so as not to get in the way of the pianos. Just enough so that you can hear them both evenly.
Well, I think I'm done wtih my picky-ness lol. A very good track. Definitely a step up from your previous works. Nice job, and keep goin' at it. If you'd like, you may drop a review on my latest track as well. Keep on rockin'.
~[IZK]