I've been working on this song for the past couple of weeks, it's been completely redone a number of times until now. This is the (first) final version.
Please critique and give feedback!
Thanks guys :)
Monte
I think I wanted more...
I liked the intro to this song... It raises a lot of intrigue and interest - and made me want to stick around to see where it would end up. The bass of the song is really good, and I wish there was more of that through out. That interesting break, between 1:20 and 1:35, wasn't my favorite. I wish the song had a little more variation as well.
wow
really dark and creepy, but i guess thats what you were going for. but yea, i think this is a good peice, though a little more variation could be used in the first minute or so.
over and over, good work, comrade
9/10
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
montehawks 
