Nah, I'm with the guy below me
Okay so dislike for this "sound" aside, the biggest problem I had with this was the amount of just general mood changes, and probably too the choppiness between the sections. It starts off pretty chill, albeit pretty screamo-genre sounding--like one of those songs you find toward the end the CD of something like Bullet for My Valentine or something. But then the change is way too abrupt into the more, I guess, "up-beat" part. Sure, maybe the transition was intentional, but it has no flow.
Next up, there was no repetition, at all. Some repetition is good, it gives the listener something to come back to. Well, maybe not in the sense that you play "such and such" measures 3458723487 times, more like sections that you can repeat (I'm butchering it, yeah, but think of verse and chrous--how they repeat the same thing for the most part). It feels fairly forgettable to me because of this. "Oh huh, alright then." Is what goes through my mind. What few parts of the song I didn't mind I never heard again.
Finally! I didn't like the vocals very much at all. Sure, I'm sure I couldn't sing any better (which may or may not be going through your heady right now), but that isn't the point. It's got that stereotypical "angsty, no one understands meeeeee!!!" screamo-sound, which I don't mind all too much to be honest so long as there are other redeeming features to the song (for example, I don't actually mind Senses Fail because they have good instrumental cohesion).
Cheers!~
Blade9000 
