My review, your song.

-Very short
-Intro is almost all of it
-Intro is really tackey
-Intro vocal could benefit from being cut up and fit to beat
-Perhaps reverse chain the volume output of the rest of the song to the voice so its always on top. Towards the 1minute mark it gets muddled in a bad way.
-Overall the mix is very murky
-Intro has far too much reverb stuff going on. This doesn't help the mix.
-Cut off freq ranges of instruments where they don't predominantly play

-Freq ranges themselves are rather diverse, song has a somewhat full sound
-While not my cup of tea, this is relatively likable minus the shortness of it. It ends as soon as it starts, but whats here is certainly palatable.
-The sample choice does suit the hardstyle genre

Overall I think with greater time investment and a little bit of mix/tech help, this could be quite the good song granted the genre/styel.