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Uploaded
May 28, 2010 | 1:26 AM EDT
File Info
Song
6.6 MB
3 min 37 sec
Score
2.67 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 2.67 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
583 Plays | 34 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Ambient
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Author Comments

Made in about one or two hours. I used only the Pizzi sytrus synth on FL studio 8. Please don't zero bomb it just because you don't like it.

~Makio

Reviews


InvisibleObserverInvisibleObserver

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

My review, your song.

Could easily benefit from a bit more instrument variation.

0:14, 0:19. 0:24 many other spots the lower bass note is clipping. Limit the mixer channel the synth is on, don't increase the bass so much. Its blurring over and giving parts a tinnyish sound because its not playing properly (its getting distorted).

Odd melody/progression, but nothing horrendous on the ears. Very wandery.

I'd suggest playing with writing a melody with more complex syncopation, or at least more varied, the entirety of this is on the on-beat and gets a very repetitive nature to it that hurts the piece.

Experiment with some drums, something soft could have really improved this.

Not astounding but certainly not bad. Keep in that direction and you'll do well.


Matakor responds:

0.o I didn't really understand half of what you just said...I'm stupidish. Actually, I didn't mess with the synth at all. I just thought it sounded cool, and then I mashed it all together after I found a little trick with it. The reason it's all wandery is cuz I'm ADHD and didn't really pay attention to that bit. Drums I might do...not sure yet.

Thanks for the memo tho. I will work on this.