AHHHHHH

get a new fucking hobby, The drums are annoying and everything else sucks. get a life,

I myself liked it

Originality I give you about a 7/10, dont know how to explain it, but I feel like I have heard it before.
clarity I give you 9/10, listening to it the song has a nice raw/dirty type feel to it, and I liked it alot.
Effort I give you a 9/10 just because of your age and how I was able to sit through the whole thing, and actually picture an action scene in a movie, or even a boss battle.
keep up the good work, and for 17 this is pretty dang good, I hope to see more work from you.

I liked it.

I like it, but it's too computerised - You didn't play any of the instruments.

Originality - 7/10 - I've heard so many Fruityloops metal songs, but this is a little better than the others I've heard.

Clarity - 8/10 - Drums are a little too loud, or guitars are too quiet. I also think FL guitars are too fuzzy.

Diversity - 7/10 - Like I said, I like the song, but there are about 4 riffs that keep repeating each other over and over again.

Effort - 4/10 - The music has a lotta thought, but you didn't play any of the instruments - it was all computerised.

Overall - 7/10 - It's good, but too computerised. I would give it 10/10 if you played at least 1 of the instruments.

Don't be angry with my rating, it's constructive and fair.