Unusual Harmony Not Really Striking a Chord
As much as I'll always love a song that strays away from any type of Diatonic chord progression.
The opening of the song really sounded blatantly wrong. I don't know if you meant to do that on purpose, but you should really be conscious of how you're handling his vocals and try to be more conscious of the key and the chord the vocal line might be suggesting. The vocal timbre is also kind of weird. It sounded stuffy at points and then at other points very clear, but I don't know if that was conscious or because of different mic-ing techniques. I realize you're not handling the recording of the vocals, but just this is just something to consider.
Also, some parts seemed repetitive because it was just a chord change to the beat with no melody (although you worked in some nice effects) so there was nothing really to focus on.
By the end it seemed to come together, so other than the weird beginning, it was a decent work.