It Has Potential
I see this is finally up, Andrew. Sounds.. okay. It beats my first song by miles lol. Just a bit of advice for you, it feels like you're switching the feel of the song too dramatically and unsmoothly too many times in the song. Each part if it was it's own song wouldn't be too bad. That huge silence halfway through towards the end is something to cut as well.
I must say 1:50-End if elaborated on, would make quite a nice ambient/dark techno/DnB beat.
Keep working. This isn't too bad. It sounds like you have the hang of whatever program(s) you're using, so just focus on one style for a song, and you should be fine. Drop me a PM next time you upload something. I'd like to hear it. =D