Actually found it intriguing

I'll be honest, I sometimes find it hard to listen the whole way through some of your songs. And that's just the fact that we have different tastes in music, to some degree.

But I listened all the way through this one, something about it was pretty catchy and made me want to stick around and see where it led.

There's one thing I've been noticing though. The general pattern of your songs are all extremely similar (In how they begin, build up, calmly play synths somewhere in the middle, and then kind of crash down to the end). It might be of benefit to take yourself out of your comfort zone and try to make something different than your norm. Maybe something that starts really fast and heavy, just as an example of something else to try.

But this was a neat song. I'm not too savvy on proper music criticism. I thought I'd let you know I enjoyed it though.

Solid Ideas

The beginning is the best part- some of the synths seem to be slightly off of the beat at times during the rest of the song. There are some cool ideas there though that have potential if they're a little cleaned up.