I agree

Tanknight it right. its very calming

Relaxing and Dreamy

Just Like A Poets Dream. Cool Song.

you did great onit

nice song

Awsome

For a first try you really got a nice song, its kind of loopy but it sounds great for a loop. Nice Job Hun!

It's nice but a little loopy.

You've done quite well for first song. (At least much better than mine. lol) Let's see here. I think it gets very smooth and could be used in video game somehow. It seems to go on and on....and loopy to me. I suggest you could add some more instruments in and maybe percussion if you like the beat to be stronger. So far, I only hear 1 or 2 sound sources playing. It's synth and piano, imo. After that, you could put in some peaks in the song, where it's clear, memorable, and different from other parts.