This was interesting

I like this and could see you really getting better on this it's really good but some parts could be more quality more vibe to it maybe some fade out then some build up on to that but honestly this was notbad just needs some more polish to it so won't need all that much

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small polish on this like some fade out and build up

~X~

It does get better, but the beginning is pretty annoying. As soon as the guitar-ish sounds kick in it sounds pretty cool though, just a bit long. If you shorten it or add some other variation between the different pieces this would be awesome. Either way it's way better than anything I ever managed to make in FL. Keep it up!

-cd-

this is dope

this would be cool for a fast pace racing game or rpg battle, like a hardcore techno beat...cool stuff

I'm a fan as it is.

I enjoyed how it started off with almost retro computer game shooting sounds, then focused more on the guitar.

The beats really remind me of shooting - it'd go well with something set on a battlefield. Maybe with robots. And mean monkeys. And all sorts of menacing mechanical creatures.

My favourite part was just after the 2 min mark where you had the more 'natural' guitar and switched the distortion on and off.

I reckon having another guitar in there might make it even cooler and more diversity is always a plus in music, but I gotta say I'm a fan as it is.

Also, the song loops reasonably well.

Cool !

It's really good !
but I don't like the fact that it's in fruity loop instead of a real guitar :)
Buy a 5$ mic and put it in front of your amp :)
Keep it up !
Kinda reminds me The Offspring !

Peace

Evil-Dog