I like the idea, but it's not finished yet...
Is it your plan to have someone rap over the top of this? Because at the moment it sounds a bit plain and repetitive so either someone rapping over the top or just add more complexity to it eg drum fills, maybe a few more sound effects, i don't know just something that keeps the listener interested. I like the idea and I will look forward to seeing a later version of this song if you ever get around to it.