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aaaaa man nice sonng!!!!!
Author Comments
...I attempt to use lyrics in a song. I think the quality of this song is a lot better than my past ones. I really enjoyed making this, and I hope you'll enjoy listening to it! It gets amazing at around 2 minutes :P
And please don't rate it low if it's only for the horrible vocals .__.
It WAS my first time trying to use them, you know...
~Please review if you have any advice/criticism! Listen to some of my other songs if you like this!~
Japillow responds:
Thanks for reviewing :D
Great job
This was a swell track you made,i thought all the beats went great with each other and it had a lot of epicness,the quality was great and i liked that it had a few lyrics through in to spice it up,overall i enjoyed this very much. =)
Japillow responds:
Thanks, I think this is one of my top 5 best songs. At least one person liked the lyrics lol.
Everything Is Swell... Except...
In my opinion everything about the song was great. The melody was very easy to listen to and kind of relaxing. In my opinion the song would have been much better without the cheesy computer voice. I also didn't think the intro transition from the piano to the actual techno was smooth. It sounded kind of awkward but other than that the rest of the song was really good!
Japillow responds:
Thank you! I guess I'll never use that voice again if people don't like it :/
O_o....
I....ok there's alot wrong with this. Before I go on, please note I'm not trying to insult, I'm simply putting in constructive crtitism. As much as this is techno, it doesn't really make justice of the genre, I'm sorry =[. I don't like the way it starts out with the piano and snare, that needs serious work. The programmed vocals just sound kidna cheesy imo, and the clap doesn't really seem to fit the way it sounds as the song progresses. Well it's like I always say, "no matter how good you think you are, there's ALWAYS room for improvement, then your songs get better". Just keep working hard and I'm sure you'll make a masterpiece.
-RealFaction
Japillow responds:
Ah, I could've sworn I put this one in as miscellaneous...I know that the vocals kind of sound rather...dumb, and I also know there's always room for improvement. I thought the clap fit in...but that's just me. And I usually throw some piano into my songs because that's what got me started making music. Anyway, thank you for your honest review!
DUDE!
Long time no see dude, beautiful song!
Sorry for teh late response, keep it up you big talented music dude! ;)
Japillow responds:
Thanks old friend! You gotta get some drumming songs up here!
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 2,432
- Faves:
- 7
- Downloads
- 262
- Votes
- 8
- Score
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4.50 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 1, 2010
- 9:47 PM EDT
- Genre
- Miscellaneous
- File Info
- Song
- 3.8 MB
- 3 min 17 sec
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Japillow Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
