Very good!

i haz spoken

Naiz! i had to listen to it 4 times in a row.

Pretty good :)

The drums are bangin man, I just think the bass could be more bad ass ^^
The bit in the middle is a little too syncopated to feel any groove, although it gets quite ferocious toward the end which I like :P and bringing in the full low strings really fills it out well! Just went from 8 to 9 out of ten coz of the later section :P
Keep it up man :)