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DiscoSex(WiP)

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i uploaded this in a hurry...plz tell me whut u think :]

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Interesting

I saw your response to my review about this song, so I decided to check it out!

Now, this is a very well-made song. The voice samples you used are mixed very well, and in accordance with the synths used, it made up a really good melodic line for the song. The bass was also good, and seeing as this is such a short track, you don't really need to worry about it being repetitive.

Only thing I could ask for would be something more in the rhythmic section, more than the thudding bass. and possibly it being longer, but it loops so well now that I thought the song was a lot longer than it really is.

Review Request Club.

I thought the start was a little abrupt to start with, but then when I heard how it looped in with the end it made more sense.
The synths you used work well, though I think that for the middle 20 seconds not enough changes; the only thing that is perceptively different is the voice that comes in, but between :10 and :25 the synths don't seem to change at all. That being said, I liked the sort of climax in the last 10 seconds, it definitely worked well and I could see how it could lead into a bigger section.
For an introduction, this is a good start and I think even the fact that not an awful lot happens in this section would become less of an issue as it grew into a longer track. One thing I would say is that the drums in general could eaither do with being a little louder, or a little bassier. Or perhaps both, just to thicken out the texture a little more.

It's a good start, not much to criticise here. Just make sure you keep the variety up in the next section and maybe continue the melody that starts at 0:30 and develop it a little more.

-Review Request Club.

My love is your love and your love is mine!

First off I want to thank you for writing an in-depth review to my song and apologize for not responding to your review request sooner.

Here goes my review on your newest piece:

First off you made good use of the filter right from the start making it transition in cleanly. No problems there.

You made good use of the vocals as mentioned by other reviewers.

I like the deep hitting kicks and bass that follows. I don't know if I would consider 42 seconds a song but this has great potential to be a transition piece for a long club mix or an intro segment. It really all depends on what you are trying to accomplish with this piece.

You also have the electro background in there with the constant fading buzz and then you bring it into the foreground very cleanly. Something I love to hear and wish I had time to do in my songs.

All around nice piece for what I'm thinking about with the intro to a hard hitting song.

Hope my review helped as much as yours helped me!

~RedSe7en

DavidRx responds:

thx for the deep review dude :D

sadly..cnat continue this track D: lost the project... :(

Lol

-Those vocals are crisp, clean, and quite interesting. Especially the moan towards the end. It definitely needs some snare to give more dimension. It's very repetitive in the instrumental aspects of the song. This could only benefit from being extended and adding some more vocals.

-Review Request Club

DavidRx responds:

thx for the review ;D...sry for the HUUUUGE DELAY XD

sadly...lost this flp. too ;S so i cant continue it D;

Awesome!!

Love those vocals you got going on... and the melody is just amazing... Maybe just a stronger kick or make it chain with the bass so you can hear it pop a little more... I think the only thing its really missing is the clap/snare and some hi hat... And a bit longer of course... But i could totally see this being used in a flash.

Awesome work man

Love it

10/10
5/5

Ziggy

P.S. Let me know when its finished so i can fav it and download it !!

DavidRx responds:

thx dude ^^, here ure always there for me reviewing my stuff :P
yea i have a stronger kick on the ''full'' versions its almoest done anc sidechained the bass of course ;P

yea ima give the clap a go :P and yupp hi hat are there ^^

;O in a horny animator flash XD

thx ^^,

and i will

Credits & Info

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Listens
2,036
Faves:
6
Downloads
192
Votes
5
Score
4.50 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 26, 2010
9:04 AM EDT
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
1.6 MB
42 sec

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