SUPER!
that was great espically your vocalls
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wake up, wake up my darling
it's time for me to go
i had a lovely night but
i think we already know
we shouldn't be this
we couldn't be this lucky
as cosmic playthings we can
make convincing loves
it shouldn't be this hard to
find a girl who dreams
of love that's longer lasting
and less of diamond rings
she shouldn't be too
she wouldn't be afraid to
pick up pieces, not just
hide in the other room
and when i see this girl i'll know
that girls before were just a show
take me down and wrap me in your lungs
i can't believe i've found the one
to set off palpitations within my heart and other organs
i can't believe i've found the one
wake up, wake up my darling
it's time for me to go
i had a lovely night but
i'm used to being alone
i want to tell you
i want to tell you secrets that
usually elicit
laughter all around
and when i see this girl i'll know
that smile on my face will grow
Awesome
Wow love the the emotion here. Good arrangement good harmony good.. everything! Keep it up!
WOW!
this really deserves a higher rating this sounds pro excellent job
Such an...
amazing song, at first i had doubt about it, but i listened to the whole song, and it got way better. You think i can get ahold of the chords?
shoester responds:
Thanks! The chords are wicked simple: E C# B A for the verse and chorus and B C# A for the pre-chorus thingy.
i like it
at first i thought you were going to hold your self back like all the other people i listen too
i love the style
you have a good ear for music
from one artist to another
great work
shoester responds:
Thanks for listening through the whole song! I feel like most people check out after 30 seconds and then just zero-bomb it.
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