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Uploaded
Apr 12, 2010 | 6:52 PM EDT
File Info
Song
1.4 MB
1 min 30 sec
Score
1.82 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 1.82 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,872 Plays | 53 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

Beat by EternalXIII titled "EX!!! - Random Name"

took an hour of my time, enjoy<3

Needle combats ya feeble attacks filled wit crap
can't touch me son, play wit that, shit
some1 get this kid a hasmasq(hazmat) suit
shoot or at least get em some glue

That old gas trap aint safe around fire
frown into a smile,
sit down son ya bars lookin tired
It's ok I guess some shots

are meant for missfire
rappin aint been lookin good 4 a while
its jus like mickey d's misses you
but they're not willin to hire

They told me ya needa smile
Them grillz need better meat to fry on
yeah, n ya rap sheet aint lookin good on file
1 more strike n ya gon b out for a while

y dont u put ya mouth where birdman got his child
PC cuz I'ma mac on u, ok a cheap shot
But u deserve a slap or two, that's it last hit
Earth misses you, Jus sayin get a better suit

diamonds in the eye aint doin good for ya m vision, dude
Ya face is changin color
oh shit this kid
wants to go hulk on me too

I think hes on a roll
watch a crash is comin soon
Quick get this kid H20 to go
before his brains turn blue

I think he's losin it dude
Nah he just needs a change of tune
well needle to the resque
oops i think i popped the life savor too

Well it's a shame
coming all this way...
and no1 to save
huh? oh well mightaswell end it

Gasmasq this battle aint gonna last might aswell rent it
This kid has trouble simply (addlib<3) -ending his own sentence
other wise ya breath stink get this kid a breath mint
Fuck it, get this kid a dentist

Reviews


QSikQSik

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I liked the lyrics

Your flow was off but it was actually more on then in other tracks I've heard you on...



RaveGSRaveGS

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Keep Writing

I like this. I don't know why everyone else is giving such low reviews. Everybody got their own style. smh. Appreciate love, nevermind hate. Keep it up dude!



DJEPITOMEDJEPITOME

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

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You Could Work On Your Timing And Flow A Little

And I Mean, Yeah Your Spittin,
But Your Not Really Saying Anything

Maybe Work On Verse Content Instead Of Just Trying To Find New Ways Of Spittin Insults.



G30G30

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice

if you can time your end rhymes a little bit more precisely this could be legendary. Wheres your new stuff man?



MicEssenceMicEssence

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I agree.

I agree with Yumbo-yak the beat was ass lol no offense to whoever made it :D
But that first line is just eewwww. "Needle combats ya feeble attacks filled with crap" nasty that was nice. You shouldaa kept going with that bro but it's all good.

9/10
5/5


Broken-Needle responds:

lol word, i dno it was fun for me so w.e=)