One big problem is all
Clarity... I see this is one of your earlier pieces though, where you seem to have been struggling more with clarity. Anyway, if i could maybe hear that singer better, and a different drum beat..with a snare on all of those accented notes to the techno-style theme to it. Pretty good though..I hope I am not bringing you down because you're quite good, I am just trying to be constructive.
OH I HEAR THE SINGER!(There at the end..i just added this part).