Amazing Song!
I'd love to give you some advise or constructive criticism..
but in my eyes, this piece is perfect! You really should be happy with your work ;)
I like this one. Most of it anyway. I think I got the sounds right at the beginning and the end.
This song reminds me of walking in an overcast, wet, grey urban environment. I decided to write it so that it made an atmosphere of depression and hopelessness. In the hustle and bustle of the city, you can find loneliness and lose sense of direction in your life.
Man, the main melody of this song (in the second half) has been hanging about in my head so friggin' long. It's so good to finally apply it to something.
Might end up changing a bit. You know what it's like; I'm never happy with my songs.
I hope you like it. I'd love to hear from you and know what you think. Constructive criticism is most welcome.
Amazing Song!
I'd love to give you some advise or constructive criticism..
but in my eyes, this piece is perfect! You really should be happy with your work ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.