hmm

have you ever even listened to Hardcore? this doesn't sound like it at all.

just because it's called "Hardcore" doesn't mean that it has to be a garbled mess, Hardcore still requires a great amount of mastering and smooth transitions.

don't change the tempo of the song, it just screws it up.

for two great example of what Hardcore should sound like listen to:

"Neophyte Hardcore" by Neophyte

"Mellow Moenie Mauwe" by Bodylotion

I'm not trying to be rude or anything but this just doesn't sound right.

Good start

It started out sounding really good. Nice intro. It didn't last long, though. After 0:18 everything started going down quickly. The mixing was actually really good, but the composition was horrible.

<wsome

i liked it alot
the begining whas intense!
but i tink its too loud
and the second beat is tooooo loud!
but i enjoyed it man
keep it up bro
peace ^^