Its goooodd!
your lucky :P
Ive been a bass master myself these days (A)
and i can tell you the following: Its goooodd!
critic: percussion/cymbals could use some more structure to make it really jumpy/uplifting. And watch out with the kick mastering, watch the bass + tremble levels.
Beginning: Nice start, got a progressive feeling.
Breakdown: japan? chinatown? very original :D
diggin it!
Rest/klimax/outro: again, very relaxing :D
Hope you can do something with this review!
_Timo