Score: 6
"Time to finish it!"
date: September 5, 2005
i liked the intro; It had a nice buildup and diverse sound to it. The song also had an evil feel to it and pulled me into the song. However, beacause it isn't finished it ended before it got "good" so i rated low on effort since it isn't finished.
As for imporiving the song, i think if you build upon what you have and make some creative melodies and added "dark" effects, you could make this very cool. You are on a good start, so go ahead and finish it. Try not to use deafult pads and effects, but keep it diverse and original sounding. You're off to a good start!
Check out my music (search for zeeber85) and feel free to rate and review! I hope this was a helpful review and look forward to hearing the completed version!
DJ Zeeber
Author's Response:
thanks for the review glad you like the choruses and it will be easy enough adding a evil effect to the rest of the song
