what is this

Im am so unfair when reviewing rap...but it makes me feel good inside. I am going to go off on a limb and say this sucks. Pianos belong in rap...so your making progress. But at least have it play notes that go somewhat with the other notes playing. Its like your using 12 tone technique on accident. Once again you seem to start off somewhat well then crumble. Honestly....change the bass once the drums come in, and this might be worth listening to. Take all that other shit out too