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Mar 14, 2010 | 5:00 AM EDT
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1.8 MB
1 min 32 sec
4.09 / 5.00

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Rated 4.09 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

A part of the "Jewel Songs". I really don't know how many "Jewel Songs" I'll make, though.
And again, another song that I want to have criticism on.

This doesn't have a story, like Ruby Heart (because I fail at delivering the story through the music).
For me, it does give out that "soul"; that certain feeling that you don't want to give up yet on something that you should do.

Made in FL Studio 9.0. Comments are this are welcome!



Rated 5 / 5 stars


Finally a song that i actually want to comment on. Has a nice happy upeat tone to me. Ehh thats all i got anyways another fine peice o work youve made and i hope to hear more. 10/10 5/5

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great, but one suggestion.

Seeing as you want some criticism, I'll be willing to give a little, although I rarely do it (and am probably bad at it haha).

I love the feeling of the song! I really like the main theme/ melody throughout the song (mainly the beginning and end. I like the middle, too, but my favorite parts are the beginning and end). I like the drums throughout this (especially 0:30 - 0:36), I think they're awesome. (I wish I could make drum parts like that. I have like.. no experience with the drums. Piano player here.)

One thing, though, is keeping me from giving this a 10/10 (and 5/5). In my opinion, I feel like the song ends too abruptly. I love the feeling of the song, so maybe adding more to it or another section would work nicely. Or possibly adding more of a dramatic ending. But that's just my opinion; I would understand if somebody disagrees with me.

Overall, I really like the song. Great job, and keep up with the good work! (I have FL 9, too. Hopefully I could learn to make drum parts like that someday haha.)
Thanks for sharing this song! Time to download.

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Naoki-Reisen responds:

That kind of drum style is just easy, actually. I can send an FL file to you with a sample of that or exactly that part from Sapphire Soul.
Or try to develop your own drum style; that's much easier, in my opinion.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Jup, this one is very nice! I like all the different elements and the melodies you have in the track. Would be nice if you made a longer version of this, too. Keep up the great work, Naoki-Reisen!^^
I've just submitted a track here on NG, too. Would be awesome if you checked it out. :P
9/10; 5/5

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Naoki-Reisen responds:

Give me the link. I'll be glad to check it out!
And thanks for the 5!