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Mar 9, 2010 | 4:27 PM EST
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
1 min 26 sec
Score
3.77 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.77 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
554 Plays | 40 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

A song i made in fl studio, not finished yet, so please give me some constructive feedback.

Reviews


CardboardowICardboardowI

Rated 4 / 5 stars

good start

the piano could use more echo at th.e start, just a tad more. Whenever you add new instruments, its usually better to fade them in rather than just adding them. The techno jump in at 50 sounds fine though.

The bassline could use a bit more drive, and the beat could be deeper.

Also the sound could use some ornaments and effects at transition points to help add a bit of polish to the song.

After repeating the melody a few times, make it diffrent by changing octaves, stacking instruments, diffrent echoes or rythm breaking and yadayaa.

Definitly a trong start though.


Kadadj responds:

Thanks for the tips, smooth transitions between different variations and new instruments is my biggest problem, got to work on that:)


dj-Jodj-Jo

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good! Intersting! But not perfect

I love Melody in this song!
The mix between techno and classic is great, but there are some problems
When making Awesome Huge Crazy Breaks and builds, try not to make it too loud.
The break at 0:50 was a bit "distortion-ey".
Try mastering it more, AKA lower volume levels, adding eq ing, et (stuff like that)
FL Studios comes with maximus right?
Try using that for mastering
As for the ending
well
The song is not done, right?
so I geuss I can't really make any comments about that lol
Synths used were just fine
(And I love the piano synth you used!)
just remeber to adjust volume levels so it doesn't distort like I said above

in all
9/10 Just work on mastering
5/5 cause the melody is awesome :)

Keep goin like this plus finish this song, you might go big on Newgrounds :D


Kadadj responds:

Thanks man, i just inserted maximus into the song, sounds aweome. Thanks again:)


MasterMemsMasterMems

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Excellent!

Nice one mon!