love it

but deff needs a bass line

I love it

I pissed my pants. Its genius. Except for the bass. You make progressions getting higher and higher in the beginning and then it completely drops off. You need fast paced bass, and the melody to blare out. Keep it up. This is A+ material
-Skull

Where is the drop?

Tease....the whole time im waiting for the beat to drop or some hard synth....but still pretty pleasing to the ear.

Good but...

The problem is that the song is gradually getting higher, and sounds as if it's gonna drop off into an epic bass mix that is fast-paced and loud... but instead it just goes back to how the beginning was... slow. I still liked the song but it could have used the "epic bass mix". Keep it up! :)

The meat

The meat of the song. 0:27- 0:40. Improve upon it right there. should had kept that going and then start dishing out the good stuff and got it pumping.
That right there is the good meat right there. Its what can make or break the song.
Add some bass in there, probably a good snare and kick it up. To give it that hard thump.
If you do that, i beg you. PLEASE PM ME telling me you did it. I want to hear it.
After about 0:40 when it started to get back soft. After when it picked up at 0:27 i kind of just fast forwarded to 1:57 where it kicked back in. 0:27 got me excited and got me pumped up, after it softened back down i wanted to keep that pumped up feeling. So thats why i fast forwarded.

Im giving it a 4 just because of the potential it has. Its like a sandwich, its got the meat and the bread afew toppings, spice it up a bit more. Make that sandwich a spicy hot good ass sandwhich with a kick.