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Nice work with the different harmonies at the beginning; the melody stayed fluid, and the song kept sounding interesting as you kept moving it to slightly different places in pretty smooth ways, so nice work there.

I'm in two minds about the second instrument (Can't tell what it is, so I'll say it's a synth), because I think you'd not have been much worse off without it, just keeping it as a piano track on its own, because as it is it doesn't add a great deal to the piano, and in some cases is something of a distraction.

At 1:58ish when everything else comes in, the instrumentation makes a little more sense, though some of the harmonies seem off in places...I think with piano instrumentation sometimes, less is more, because you still want that to be the main focus for a lot of reasons, and it kind of feels messier when you try and add a whole lot more instruments into the mix.

In general, this is a pretty awesome tune, there's nice chord changes in it...in general, I'm in two minds about the instrumentation, but it's a good track nonetheless. And either way, I'm sure your mother was very touched that you wrote it.

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Good song

A very good song. It starts off very slow, but it picks up a few seconds into the song.

I really like the melody, it creates a very nice atmosphere: Not overly happy or cheerful, but not sad or melancholic either. I think you found a good mix between those emotions.

The ending is a bit disappointing, though, it ends too suddendly.

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Well

-I think you did a really sweet thing for your mother. Mom's do a lot of work and they need some appreciation every now and then.

-Nice melody that is very light and heart warming. There is much variety as far as keys used which is good since it makes it more enjoyable to listen to.

-It would sound much better if it was mastered in an audio program. Not sure which key of the piano it was but it sounded a little off to me. Other than that it's simple and doesn't need anything changed as far as song make-up.

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sweet

all around sweet. awesome melody and nice intentions. this song can easily bring you to your "happy place".

I really enjoyed this, nothing to be done to improve it.