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Feb 28, 2010 | 6:57 PM EST
File Info
2.6 MB
1 min 8 sec
4.10 / 5.00

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Rated 4.10 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
455 Plays | 40 Downloads
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

hopes you like it. tell me what to do better. please comment



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Hmm, workable, but not really great...

Well, you wanted constructive criticism, so I'll try my hand at it:

The intro sounded strange b/c I think you were using open hats. Maybe stick with closed hats when doing a 16th note roll for an intro?

The underlying bass had a typical chord progression, and it was fine... until 0:26 came along. The lead is in a different key. The first notes were right, but that second harmonic is not in key; it's also out of beat at one section (I think).

So, in the end.... try working up some better harmonies/chords. The layering is fine since it's at a decent pace, but the lead is what kinda messes it up. If you're going for a quick 1-minute theme, then I'd suggest that be the only thing I'd realy suggest remastering.

onewheeleddj responds:

thanks for the info