Very loud and heavily distorted

BUT very good. I like this. I think if you were to expand this to be a full length song and edit the mixing so that each instrument is fully audible (not the same volume, just audible) then this would be one of my favorite Newgrounds Audio Portal submissions.

Great job so far!

sweet jesus..

Please for the love of god finish it!!!

go for it

You got my approval to finish it. d('.")b

Sounds like it has potential!

Alloud is right on this one. I usually prefer hearing finished work on here, but what you have currently is really good.

Instrumentation: Nice leads, synth, chords, bass lines, and drums. Nothing too elaborate, but good enough.
Notation: I really like the melody that you have going on here, but your drums could use a bit of variation in the composition department.
Other: The only problem that this has is that the sudden rest at the ten-eleven second mark is a bit grating. On the other hand, 179 kb is a decent filesize for something as small as this.

What's Good:
-Nice melody
-Good instrumentation
-Great tempo
-Small filesize

What's bad:
-The drums are a bit repetitive
-The sudden fade at the end is a bit annoying

Overall: Here's your eight, Proshot.

Good melodies

The melodies are nice, I like the chord progression. Only thing I would like different is to change up the drums rather than just repeating the same pattern.