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Date
02/20/2010
File Info
Song
2.7 MB
2 min 19 sec
Score
4.36 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Some chill song i made, i dont like it too much, tell me what you think.
I might be considering this on my album if i change it up a lot but im not sure yet.
If you wanna check out the list of songs that ill be re-making for my album go here:

haywyremusic.com

-Haywyre

Reviews


cottontwancottontwan

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 16, 2010

i remeber when i was like sheenancreed..

you where actually the reasone i got these 60$ headphones... i dont see what you dont like aboutn this one its alright to me.



sheenancreedsheenancreed

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 24, 2010

you know what

ive been listening to you for a while, i love your stuff. you make me want to go out and buy the most expensive pair of headphones i could find and blare this into my brain! your great man, and this doesn't sound as bad as you think



GunstarGreeneGunstarGreene

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 27, 2010

My two cents.

Haywyre, this isn't bad, but just compared to your other stuff I'd probably pass on this song. Example, if you had an album together this would be a track I would listen to occasionally instead of every time I popped the album in.

The piano part that comes in at 1:04 and then the flute-esq. sound at 1:26 reminds me of too many horrible smooth jazz albums I've been forced to listen to while sample sifting. I'd really consider changing that altogether.

However I really dig the outro, 2:09 afterwards is great.



ChistaChista

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 8, 2010

Substitute one thing

This is tight, smooth, and relaxing.
You can't go wrong with that catchy little melody, but the outro is all over place.
It feels like you took the song too far up the ladder once the crash hits at 1:47, it starts wobbling and feeling iffy y'know brother.

I wrote some lyrics to this, but I don't even know how to make anything work with the end. I feel like you should be taking out those... echoing Wooowowwowo I don't know, sirens? But beside that, it's all there. Finish this one off for real, I think these lyrics can fit in perfectly!!



glitchoglitcho

Rated 4 / 5 stars February 21, 2010

rather good

this one is quite good, but rather simple to my taste, can't explain why... it flows quite smoothly, but doesn't catch attention at all.
didnt like the flutes, i think you should try placing some slight saw-synth there, maybe it would give this one a new breath.

you can do much better, so i give it only 8 of 10)


haywirehaywire responds:

ok, thanks