very nice
Sounds pretty nice. I can't really say that it kept me too interested like some of your other works though. I guess it was all the transitions from clean to distorted to clean and back, I dunno.
Perhaps more heavy distorted riffs should be put in so that the transitions don't occur so often. I also thought that the second clean section, the one after the intro, could've been shortened by taking out the first half before the lead guitar kicks in at 1:07. Just my thoughts.
4/5