nice

good work some nice synth patterns here
great track

Nice melodies :)

But yeah, I've gotta agree with people below. Due to the breaky nature of the song a thicker kick would be nice,

I freaking LOVE where you take it around 1:10 in or so. That digitized synth you use is sooo sweet, loved it. :)

Felt when you brought it back at 1:48 or so it woulda been nice if it was a harmonized melody instead of the same melody as the supporting lead.

Love when you drop it back to the digitized synth at 2:29, I love that thing. though the way you drop the one supporting synth is kinda weak, better transition woulda been nice.

ends rather abruptly too. still, great work here, man. :) kept me grooving for most of it, just felt lacking in a few spots. :)

Very Nice

when i selected dance music and saw this at the top i thought great this song looks good. then i played it...and now im saying this song doesnt match dance however it is good techno great work mate.
Windermatt
(Mr Timeless)

Sounds great.

That is all I can say =)

Idea isn't bad

That said, some things are missing.
Your kick-drum is really weak, get a better sample (VEC 3 has some good presets).
The EQing seems to be all highs, EQ the bass lower.

Apart from that it's pretty good =)