Pretty good.

This would be even better with a little fine tuning, such a the turning point. It sounded a little too much like Lord of the Rings to me.

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Its nice, but you know what song was really sweet, the first one that plays on Episode 12 of One Life Remaining, a kinda sad and happy song at the same time. If you could upload that one it would be sweet!

it's ok

it's decent, but if you're looking for a more epic, and dark song, (which i think would be good), you shouldn't switch from minor to major a lot, also work on the dynamics a bit, everything seems to be the same level, other than the low brass. on the last note, turn down the bass on the low brass too, they're decaying. :)

Very creative

~ Seriously, this is a kick ass soundtrack. It sounds like something that would be in a movie OST or something. I can totally picture an elite special ops team in the Alphs or some type of desert/deserted landscape area (like a cave) in a horror movie, and one of them turns out to be the bad guy or something.

All in all - pretty damn epic.
Epic song is epic.

Hmm

Its seems like the inspiration behind this piece (if so) was from the Halo CE soundtrack Lament for Private Jenkins. Really Cool Still, especially the pick up ending that could lead to a whole other song