unbattered but very good.

I think you're very good at dnb and you know how to use all sounds well together, but really, the melodies dont go anywhere.. are almost non existant.

At the beginning it has a good buildup for a oncoming melody but you just stay in a rather ambient atmosphere.

Just noise in harmony do not automatically make a good melody, but i can hear youll get there, ill check back on you sometime for sure.

I dont mean this the wrong way, on the contrary; you might intentionally leave out solid melody but you should understand (especially by your age, you probably grew up with it aswell) that the 8bit genre lived on melody, without it its rather empty.

Nevertheless, this is an excellent piece worth getting used to, good enough to favorite.