its ok but isn't grunge

poopie birds

first of all...

i think a studio version of this would be awesome

but u bring nothing new... the chord progression, the guitar strumming is all done over and over. to stand out, you need something unique. (and im missing a guitar-solo)

the whispering is a nice touch, but try to tweak the effect so it sounds better.
the echo is pretty nice, sounds great with the screaming, although it comes so sudden, like wtf did that come from... maybe u can increase the amount of the effect from zero up to the level u want it. like a fade-in (dont know if thats possible)

and the left-right pan effect is outright annoying.
and try to keep the mic distance to your mouth the same at all times! there are some volume issues there.

havent listened to the lyrics really, topic is w/e to me :)

on newgrounds standards you earn a 10/10 5/5

i really like this