so you finally posted it?
nice job, i really like this.
and btw i boosted you by 0.18 with my vote :D
Author Comments
There is some pretty good stuff in here. Ive gotten better at this and Im starting to remember what I learned in music theory and Im applying it to this. I don't really want to add anything to this song. I want to start fresh with an epic song but I figured I would post this anyway. Please REVIEW in comment form. I wanna know what you think is good and what you think isn't.
Cheezer20 responds:
haha thanks and now im up to 4.1 and i DIDNT rate it myself. pretty legit right there
Just short of masterpiece.
I like the light, simple feeling that starts at about 0:39. This song would definitely reach high on the 'epic in greatness' list if you were to expand on that kind of style, because you seem to do it pretty well.
Now for a breakdown.
0:00-0:13 - Interesting start. Probably shouldn't repeat, though; a bit of repetition should stay, but change the last note or two of the pattern.
0:13-0:26 - Nice pattern here. The foreshadowing of later elements adds a nice flavor.
0:26-0:39 - Good effects here, but the transition at the end seemed very sudden.
0:39-1:19 - Nice sorta bouncy feel. Good buildup, suits the tone.
1:19-End - Good transition. Good choice at taking out the drums at the end, although probably should have lengthened the last note just a tad so that it the ending doesn't seem too abrupt.
All in all, excellent work. If anything, it's too short to convey its awesome excellence fully. I hope to see more music like this in the future!
Cheezer20 responds:
Thank you so much for a very detailed review. I've been waiting for something like this. Yeah I finally got to a point that I liked. I experimented with this song to see what I could do and now that I found what I like to do with this music, I will write a fuller and longer song.
Cool
Nice. It was catchy with an almost old video game style kinda tune
Cheezer20 responds:
haha thanks
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