A little repetitive

It's not a bad little piece, but I wouldn't listen to it by choice, necessarily. I think that you've got a decent few seconds of loop, but you've overused it and by making a long loop of it, it doesn't seem to want to go away, which is frustrating.

You've done well with the variation, but as I can hear, it needs some more finesse to it, to get a better finished product across to your target market. Keep working at it and you'll be able to put across something that had more staying power and something that could keep people guessing for a few loops of the track.

You did really well with the looping though, as it was seamless.

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Nice song

A pretty nice song. The melodies sound very catchy and even though they don't change too much during the song they don't get repetitive.
I also like the background beat. It sounds very interesting and goes together well with the melodies.
Another thing I like is that the song loops pretty well. Towards the end the song gets a bit quieter and at the start it is back at full volume. This sounds pretty interesting, just as if I would step into a house and I can hear the music only through a closed door, but then I step back out again and I can enjoy the song at full volume again.

Anyway, I still think the song could be a bit more varied. Repetitiveness isn't that big of a problem here, but some changes to the main beats and melodies are always a nice thing.

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