relaxing/alarming

guitars are just a little off in the transition parts in the beginning

some more noodling and hammer-ons would help the song out, although i must say that the chords were very beautiful :)

some of the attacks were a little off...i guess that's because you recorded all of these separately? do you have a metronome? u should use one to make it easier to get the tracks together

the first part could be incorporated into the rest of the song pretty well. experiment with that...the form sort of reminded me of The Pretender by The Foo Fighters, and trying to do that same arpeggiating/ chord technique might be perfect for this song

the stop-and-play-chords-part at 1:41 was pretty cool, but would sound better if there was some noodling between each chord.

sorry...most of these are suggestions :P I guessing you know most of the technical messups so this was the best i could come up with. i hope it helps! 7/10 4/5