Really nice start and middle, but the end wasn't good at all.
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Heavy and thick as the sun, wandering the desert outfitted with everything but a soul. Impenetrable, indestructable, and inhuman, alone he stands; the Juggernaut.
Woooooooooo. hope you enjoy this short, fat piece of sweet cake! There's plenty so come back for seconds. And I'm immature. Even for sixteen...
If you had enough indestructable armour on you, and you tripped, you wouldn't be able to get back up. That would suck. Then everybody would be shooting you but you wouldn't die. You'd just lie there... face first.... eating sand. Man. I never want to be a juggernaut. Unless it's a massive juggernaut ship or something. With huge cannons that you can operate with your mind. Mind controlled cannons.
Ok... I'm done.
I just got z3ta... as you may be able to tell. So don't nade on me for using presets and stuff. there are a few.
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Wow ^-^ Like I really dig this music, man.
MIND POWER
Who said in order to be a a juggernaut you need a gun! I love that idea of mind controlled cannons inside the worlds demise of a Indestructable tank! Or Ship...a ship can work to. 5/5 and 10/10 great song and imagination! Mind cannons FTW!
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Awesome! No wonder they put this on the ng picks channel
A Mind-Strecher
The Juggernaut cannot die, he has it all, power, strength. But he cannot live. He is nothing more than a machine of war. His power is his downfall; he has no life outside of the army, nothing beyond his armor, just an empty soul. He is the true cold machine.
mooseymaniac responds:
Love it man :). You really did some thinking there.
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