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Date
01/13/2010
File Info
Song
6.8 MB
7 min 25 sec
Score
3.03 / 5.00

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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
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Author Comments

This is a verrry old song (written when I was 13). I'm making an album of old songs re-recorded (entitled Shattered Fragments of a Past Forgotten), so this doesn't show off my musical ability, but does show off my sexy new mix. However, thanks to NewGrounds' 8mb limit, the quality of this is vomit. So for a proper listen to my lovely new set-up, check out Last Words.

It's currently instrumental because I don't like doing vocals. I shall do at some point, the song is meant to have them, but I'm tired right now and I want to go to bed.
If anybody wants to have a crack at doing them, please be my guest. As with any good song, the first verse doesn't start until 1:38.

With regards to the quality, I'm willing to send anyone a sexy 320 bitrate version, just PM me your email or something.

UPDATE 28/02/10: Vocals added, mixed slightly better. I shall add a download link for the album when it's done (which should be Tuesday).

UPDATE: 03/03/10: ALBUM FINISHED! Download Scattered Fragments of a Past Forgotten, a collection of old songs by me re-recorded, including this song as well as 5 others, for free from here:
http://www.jamendo.com/en /album/62448

Lyrics:
She's back again
I close my eyes and swallow the pain I feel, this can't be real
She wants it now, I've got to find my way out somehow, somehow

She's the salt in my wounds, their hearts collapse before her now
How could you?
She betrays in rags on body-bags of lives that once revolved around her
They revolved around her

She's back again
Three months later it's the same old worn-out script
She kisses my neck and begs for more
Her smile is lies and deceit, masquerading a love for me somehow, somehow

She's the flesh on their bones, those who swore they'd die for her
An ironic matter
She lies in homes of broken souls, but still she lives
And so, it begins

Now, your time has come
So go enjoy the last night of your life
How, how could you do this?
A fool, I loved you

[Our father who art in heaven, hallowed be thy name
Burn the blood of this demon-whore, make her realise this pain
Your time is running out]

How could you?
How could you do this to me?
I bled your name
Demon, slanderer
Whore.

Reviews


Corpus-DelictiCorpus-Delicti

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 26, 2010

hmm...

I like it, Downloaded :D


Jakisdead responds:

Thanks, keep an eye out for the album coming soon!


Andy218Andy218

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 17, 2010

Album release?

I just went through a bunch of your songs and you said that you were doing an album of old songs you wrote. Is there any chance you could upload them all in hq in one pack on a sharing site? Anyway, kick ass everything. Who ever zero bombed this song is either severly mindFuckED, or an idiot.


Jakisdead responds:

Yesss this will be happening at some point. I've got all of the instrumentals finished apart from the last song which is half-done. Then I have to do vocals, which I'm NOT looking forward to XD

It's only gonna be six tracks, but it should be a decent album length because most of the songs (such as this one) are quite long.

I'll be posting it on my Jamendo when it's done (if you haven't been there yet, go visit it now!) It shouldn't be more than a few weeks!


TheBardOfBlasphemyTheBardOfBlasphemy

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 22, 2010

bullshit

fucking analwhore 0 bombers I give them a 0 for 0riginality.

as with another song just reviewed... i got an itch in my brain telling me the guitars need to fatten up. Can you hear what I'm on about or am I imagining/bitching/whining/cocksuckin g????

still rocks my socks


Jakisdead responds:

Thanks man, zero bombers suck ass but sadly it's something that we all have to deal with here on NG.

Once again, I'll have a play with the mix. These songs are far from finished yet!


djhoohaadjhoohaa

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 15, 2010

tunage

again why i like your stuff when i dislike heavy metal is beyond me. good work :)


Jakisdead responds:

Haha it's an honour. Thank-you!


JeffaroJeffaro

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 13, 2010

Very good.

I can't believe that you wrote this when you were 13.I call bull shit on that.(A compliment) I never could have conceived something like this when I was playing guitar at 13.Anyways..As for the actual song.

At certain parts I felt that it dragged on for too long.A little too much riding on the low B/C? for my liking.I felt that this song could have been better if it had lyrics and a cool harmonic minor/phrygian type lead.Other than those minor flaws I felt that this song was REALLY solid.

The synth/piano fade was very nice.

Good stuff, dude.


Jakisdead responds:

Haha thanks dude! XD

It is a bit long and repetative, I agree. It was originally designed to be a long, atmospheric end to an album.

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review!