Score: 7
"Not bad. (too short btw)"
date: August 15, 2005
I can see this song turning into something really good if you open up they synths. Make them bigger, wider, sligght sterio panning. I know your going for that short poppy sound but I think this song would be much better if you made the synths more wide and sweeping and touched it all up with some reverb. Just my opinion... The melodey is pretty good, but like I said the feeling is lacking because of the synths subdued nature. Also, mix it up, make it longer. Mix up some beats and do some drop off build up right about where you fade out (just to make it longer and more intersting...) Not your best work, but it has potential. =)