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Jan 6, 2010 | 7:44 AM EST
File Info
6.6 MB
4 min 49 sec
3.35 / 5.00

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Rated 3.35 / 5 stars
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620 Plays | 38 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool

Author Comments

A Project we started with a friend.
He is still writing lyrics, but please tell me your opinion about the beat and melody!

The harshest critic teaches the most! :D

Sorry if this is in wrong category... I just didn't find better one.. :P



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I couldn't really discern any real melody or anything in the instruments, and the beat seemed kinda all over the place, but it DID work on some level. So I would say work on tightening up the beat, getting rid of things that maybe don't belong in a hip hop beat, and get a bassline in there. Also try to make the tunes that are sort of in the background at the moment "pop" more, make them real concise and catchy. Hope this helps.

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