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Uploaded
Dec 26, 2009 | 9:14 PM EST
File Info
Song
2.3 MB
2 min 0 sec
Score
3.31 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.31 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
525 Plays | 42 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

I wanted to make this track longer, but every time I tried a chorus it fell flat on its face. Since I couldn't figure out what this needed, I thought I'd just submit it and see what everyone else had to say. If you have any suggestions about what I could do to lengthen this track, I'd love to hear 'em.

Reviews


lehcarlehcar

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Whaat this is crazy.. Had to give this one a second listen. Beginning just draws you in. Sucks you lost your songs :( but def worth making more :)


T-rebel responds:

Heh, thx for actually reviewing all of these. Wasn't expecting such high praise either. I'm kinda sad I lost this one, cuz it wasn't finished and nobody really gave me any good feedback on where to go wwith it next. Oh well...


SFaPiL2SFaPiL2

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

That bass reminds me of the Matrix ^__^

More precisely "Clubbed to Death - (Kurayamino mix)" from the original matrix soundtrack.

Anyway, back on topic. This seems like THE perfect chrono-trigger style soundtrack. I managed to recognize a few Sytrus presets, but they've been used very well (nice mastering, btw). One particular instrument (the flute-ish instrument that shyly fades-in at times) is spectacular: Superb pitch-bending.

I'm not quite good at explaining myself, but I'd suggest focusing on the melody you added in 1:05 (the one present at the very beginning as well). Make it develop to something else either by modifying the melody directly or by adding a clone instrument that makes a harmonic melody in conjuction with the former that eventually will fade away giving way to the new melody. I hope it's clear.

I'm not 100% certain, but I think that the bass' melody is acting like a red herring: I think it got you stuck melody-wise not giving you space for something else. Try muting the channel in FL Studio; Find an alternative background melody, maybe this will help you.

If all else fails (and you trust me enough ^__^) pass me the flp. and I'll try and figure out something for you.

Keep up the great work!


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T-rebel responds:

Thanks for the review! As always, it's full of great ideas. Just one problem: my laptop (with literally all my .flp files) was stolen. So basically, "everything I ever said and everything I ever did is gone and dead" ( Smashing Pumpkins).

I haven't bothered getting back to makin' tunes since then. But it's been almost a year now... maybe the mourning period's over? Who knows.


Sirdangolot5Sirdangolot5

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Reminds me of "the alternate route"

Strikes me as similar to the song from SM64 when you were in a Bowser level.

Anyways, not much happens in this track, and it didn't really get me going, but what does sounds pretty damn cool. I give you this seven out of ten in the hopes of it inspiring you to get some leads in this bish, and then I'll write you a full on review with a better score.

Uh, the snares are pretty cool too. Sort of a march feel there.