Needs more variety

In this song it sounds like you're just adding new layers that repeat over and over for three minutes and twenty one seconds. Doesn't make for a very interesting song at all. I'd recommend going through and adding more variety (within the parts). Change rhythms, change instrumentation, change meter or tempo... heck change the volume of certain parts. Add in different audio FX (reverb, chorus, delay) then take it away. Just letting it sit there can really get annoying. I'm all for percussion-only pieces but a certain degree of depth and variety is needed.

Cool

Has a nice beat. Good job :D.

No.

I agree with CokeFiend, no rhythm, all preset drum sounds and a whistle probably aren't going to make a very good song.

no rythm

there was no rythm to this song it felt like i was listening to a 120 bps mixed with a 100 and a 90, its all ambient sounds. this gave me a very large outstanding headache.

I don't understand either

This song really should have never been made. First of all, this is not techno. Not even close. This is a collection of what I think are percussion presets. Those types of songs are really close to the worst type of song you can get, if you can even call them one, and along with the fact that it is basically a single mess of percussion repeated for the whole entire song, this just made me cringe.

Broken tune+no melody+repetition=low score.