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Uploaded
Dec 16, 2009 | 5:28 PM EST
File Info
Song
6.4 MB
5 min 35 sec
Score
1.75 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 1.75 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
497 Plays | 47 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

I know its not the best song, i'm just starting out so please if you are going to say something bad please also include how i can fix it.

Reviews


xJinxyxxJinxyx

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I agree with Jnr1114

If you were to add something behind the melody that was louder and a little different sooner, this song could be something spectacular!

The key-change towards the end would sound better further towards the beginning of the song, then got stronger towards the end.



Jnr1114Jnr1114

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Some things. . .

What your doing is overlaying drums and new instruments. You keep that one beat going for a long time, and all you do is overlay more instruments. You need to make a whole new riff/melody after a minute or people will hate it. You gotta keep people interested. You spent 2:30 minutes on the same thing then it changed. You need a change every 30-1:00. This song should only be 2 minutes. Instead, you made it really boring. Other then that, I liked the beat, noise and the melodys. You just need new ones.
Good job for starting out. Everyone who starts out has this problem, repetitive songs.

Try something new, shorter with more melodys.

3/5 for the cool riffs.

-JNR


caleb392 responds:

TY, and xJinxyx sooo much. thats the kind of help i needed thank you.