Dude this is really good. Why did your wife leave you dude? She's crazy, you've got talent
Lyrics:
This ain't the life for me. This ain't the life for me.
A rose has withered. A soul has been crushed.
All for this world's ungodly lust.
This ain't the life for me. This ain't the life for me.
Flowers on their way to another lost love's grave.
All for this heart's blackened maze.
This ain't the life for me. This ain't the life for me.
Logic escapes my brain. Hindsight is acid rain.
Pouring tears on her picture frames.
This ain't the life for me. This ain't the life for me.
This ain't the life for me. This ain't the life for me.
Dude this is really good. Why did your wife leave you dude? She's crazy, you've got talent
It's good.
The style is great, guitar fits the lyrics.
You put a lot of though into to this dint you?
You even made it sad, that's a rare combination found in a song these days.
I'm looking forward to see more of your work, well hear more :P
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Good song and the singeer sounds like the singer of collective soul....
complement from me but also you use a little echo from the voice but whatever.
Nice Combo
Hey,
It's very interesting. The guitar and vocals have way to much effects on them. But for some odd reason it works really well! Also the lyrics are really well written. "This ain't the life for me" or "A soul has been crushed" - "all for this worlds ungodly list. Incredible, simply amazing. I also love that you didn't stick to a traditional composition method. Yeah, you have a chorus and versus. But to me this does sound like a story or a piece of writing. I think you would do really well writing a musical. You have a unique sense of music, however it sounds quite commercial. I don't know, I wouldn't be surprised if I heard your music in a professional play.
9/10 5/5
Thank you. I wrote this song using the whole "the one that got away" theme.
awesome!
i really liked the lyrics, it tells a story... .__.' i think. but it was awesome. XD
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