Main theme is pretty cheesy

I think that everything around the main theme is really good. The feel that i get from everything else besides the main theme (part it starts out with) has more of a resentful/sentimental feel to it. The main theme just doesn't really fit with the rest of the song, for me anyways. The part that starts at 1:33 is really good. You nailed the genre, but I think the styles could be extended on from either side (the beggining theme, or the progressive and resentful/sentimental parts of the song)

Great music though. I can't believe you just started in november. that's incredible